Score: 7

"hmm"

submission: MGS: Flash Collab DISC 01

date: July 13, 2008

The animation wasn't bad, the content just didn't reach my expectations. You should be spending less time animating, and more time writing funny and uncommon jokes. Cock jokes? Are you 12 years old or something?

Everyone is asking for the animators to remove them, but NO, the animators want to be smartasses and keep them coming ¬.¬ Let's get over that shit, and start the true smart jokes where you think a bit to get to the end...

Score: 9

"Getting better"

submission: Base 17 ::03::

date: June 26, 2008

Character experssions (like amazment) need to be delivered more abruptly but not so artificially. Someone who doesn't know fear, who can't be sad or angry, can't really get surprised from hearing they're breaking out, even though he lost a friend.

Year 2105? We're more around year 2010 or something, didnt' find anything that technological so far. The backgrounds need to be worked on. The music is well chosen. You still need to work on animations, and trying to sync lip movement with the actual voice acting.

Deliver the plot a little better by making sure the voice actors undertand how the plot is progressing. Faces are perfect, but the bodies need to be improved a little bit. Smooth animation is still a bit rare in some parts of the anime. Keep it up though, you've done far better since Base 17.01

Score: 9

"Wow"

submission: Base 17 ::02::

date: June 26, 2008

Great Story, Great Ending, Great Animation.

Things you need improved just by a little bit are: Experessing certain emotions (when his eye went all wide and his eyes started shaking, that was kinda creepy looking :P).

And character animations. This series seems to be mainly fighting oriented rather than just talking and talking. So you'll need to thoroughly work on getting smoother fighting animations, and also when he walks, you can improve a bit his foot animations ;) Overall, this was better than the first episode. It's a 5/5 ;)

Score: 7

"Not bad :)"

submission: Base 17 ::01::

date: June 26, 2008

I was going to start off with episode 3, but things should be done chronologically. The voice acting isn't too bad, although louder would have been better, the background audio is very good. What you lacked in this short is the animation. Character faces aren't bad at all, but the surroundings need to be thoroughly improved.

Score: 7

"Not bad"

submission: Queers of War

date: June 6, 2008

Well, the animation was good at least...

Score: 10

"Wow lol."

submission: My New Grounds

date: June 5, 2008

Awesome xD

Smooth animation
Clear voices
Funny sound effects
Well communicated
Humorous.

You hit the 5 main points I give votes for all on the head. 10/10. 5/5. Good work.

Score: 6

"Liked your loading screen"

submission: The Nutcracker

date: June 5, 2008

Nothing else. The game was too limited. The pony part was going too fast, the character himself respons with some 200ms retardedness. When you hit 3 as, it's not an a per hit, so you have to time the 3 hit combo with each hit, but rather hit 3 as at the start, have him complete the combo, then get play once again. There's no way a fight could be that lame...

Score: 10

"5b was as far as I could be bothered to go."

submission: Epsilon

date: June 5, 2008

And that's where I stopped and though... WOW, this is indeed a game.

Score: 6

"Large scale orgy"

submission: The Naruto Collab

date: June 5, 2008

It's not like it was a well balanced collab... some of them were very nicely detailed, others were taking from a GBA game kinda graphics, others were as if some 10 year old baby painted them, and the animation was totally not suited for an action/fighting scene. They move robo-like, rather than smooth. It just doesn't work like that in flashes =/ Well, I'm giving you a 3 since.. Not bad, in fact, I don't mind watching it.

Score: 8

"Worth it"

submission: Apples.

date: June 5, 2008

I'll start off by saying:

Graphics - 10/10
Animation - 9/10
Plot - 2/10
Humor - 7/10
Addictivity - 6/10

Graphics are perfect, the plot is totally unkown to all the viewers. As far as I could understand: An apple fell off of a truck, these two nutters felt like killing each other for it, rather than sharing, and so and so. Why they teamed up together when the plane passed is unkown, why they became once again foes at the end is unkown too :).

Putting those minor details apart, you should be working on inserting voice actors next. It will pimp up your flash, and if you can give us a small intro on your next flashes of what it is all about, it will improve the whole experience :)

Overall:
8/10.
4/5.